To the readers out there, most of you might think, "Why would I do poems based off of William Carlos Williams?"
In contrast to what you most think its not because I want to slack of or be lazy, its because I want to get points through in the shortest amount of lines possible. That is what both "This Is Just To Say" and "The Red Wheelbarrow" do so well. Both of the poems straightforwardly deliver a point out to the reader in very few lines, which brings both effectiveness and efficiency to both the poem and the poet.
Also, to be honest the poems that I've done to emulate "This Is Just To Say" and "The Red Wheelbarrow" did not take a short time at all. I had a lot of trouble figuring out a point to deliver and then fitting it in into so little lines.
The length of a poem does not dictate its capabilities of carrying out a message, and I wanted to carry that point out.
Tuesday, 20 May 2014
Monday, 19 May 2014
2 poems emulating "The Red WheelBarrow" (William Carlos Williams)
1.
My life depends
upon
The choices
made
throughout my
career
inside my
brain
2.
People depend
upon
the works of
others
touched with their
labor
within this
country
My life depends
upon
The choices
made
throughout my
career
inside my
brain
2.
People depend
upon
the works of
others
touched with their
labor
within this
country
2 poems emulating the works of William Carlos Williams (specifically "This Is Just To Say")
1.
The oranges
from the tree
were so juicy
and sweet
If you
want some
I left a couple
on the dinner table
2.
I have taken
the calculator
inside the drawer
beside your bed
Please understand
I had an exam
so the calculator
was essential
The oranges
from the tree
were so juicy
and sweet
If you
want some
I left a couple
on the dinner table
2.
I have taken
the calculator
inside the drawer
beside your bed
Please understand
I had an exam
so the calculator
was essential
My Ten Limericks
There was a young man from the West
Who dreamed of being the best
It just takes hard work
But he was a jerk
And now his whole life is a mess
I once bought a nice looking car
But man, it used way too much tar
It costed too much
And bad, was the clutch
So I traded it for a jar
Some people may say I am weird
I had to explain as I sneered,
"Its why I'm unique
And possibly chic"
All questions have now disappeared
There was a young person named Jim
That people kept bothering him
As he stood right up
And gave them a cut
He now has a friend who's named Tim
A talkative man from the East
Who spend his time talking to geese
To much of his shock
They started to talk
He now has a friend in those geese
There was a small goldfish that frowned
For reasons he was very down
He did not enjoy
Himself as a toy
So he gladly jumped to the ground
Some people just don't understand
That I am not a normal man
I have a bad feel
For things that aren't real
And I try to change but I can't
There is a hockey team called Habs
Whose goalie drove players so mad
Stopped shot after shot
To score, they will not
He's quite an amazing young lad
The Stanley Cup playoffs are great
It brings me together with mates
As we cheer the team
And players have dreams
That fuel them to go out and skate
I like to go on many hikes
Activities that many like
I've made many friends
To hikes we attend
A great trail can be "Northern Pike"
Who dreamed of being the best
It just takes hard work
But he was a jerk
And now his whole life is a mess
I once bought a nice looking car
But man, it used way too much tar
It costed too much
And bad, was the clutch
So I traded it for a jar
Some people may say I am weird
I had to explain as I sneered,
"Its why I'm unique
And possibly chic"
All questions have now disappeared
There was a young person named Jim
That people kept bothering him
As he stood right up
And gave them a cut
He now has a friend who's named Tim
A talkative man from the East
Who spend his time talking to geese
To much of his shock
They started to talk
He now has a friend in those geese
There was a small goldfish that frowned
For reasons he was very down
He did not enjoy
Himself as a toy
So he gladly jumped to the ground
Some people just don't understand
That I am not a normal man
I have a bad feel
For things that aren't real
And I try to change but I can't
There is a hockey team called Habs
Whose goalie drove players so mad
Stopped shot after shot
To score, they will not
He's quite an amazing young lad
The Stanley Cup playoffs are great
It brings me together with mates
As we cheer the team
And players have dreams
That fuel them to go out and skate
I like to go on many hikes
Activities that many like
I've made many friends
To hikes we attend
A great trail can be "Northern Pike"
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